And that Robb came back, only to be with Jon, and it wasn't anything creepy attached to it. Like, no climbing out of the grave, nor becoming a vampire, nor a werewolf, nor Jon being dead and Robb was there to take him to heaven - he just came back.
And the descriptions, and Jon's pain and relief when Robb came back. And I liked that you made Jon an adopted child - it takes away that creepy brothers-by-blood thing that is always there, no matter how used to it you are and how much you read it.
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Date: 2011-08-24 04:41 pm (UTC)And that Robb came back, only to be with Jon, and it wasn't anything creepy attached to it. Like, no climbing out of the grave, nor becoming a vampire, nor a werewolf, nor Jon being dead and Robb was there to take him to heaven - he just came back.
And the descriptions, and Jon's pain and relief when Robb came back. And I liked that you made Jon an adopted child - it takes away that creepy brothers-by-blood thing that is always there, no matter how used to it you are and how much you read it.
Great job, and thanks for sharing!