I really like the simplicity of this, the matter-of-factness to the stacatto rhythm that conveys the way Sam's struggling to define things that just can't be defined that easily. And the slow, struggling momentum you can feel building just beneath the surface. Nicely done :) Lynsey
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Date: 2008-10-25 04:22 pm (UTC)Lynsey